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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (AMQP-43) Review comments from Ram Jeyaraman
Review comments from Ram Jeyaraman ---------------------------------- Key: AMQP-43 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-43 Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC Issue Type: Improvement Reporter: Rob Godfrey Assignee: Rob Godfrey Front Page: - Add Working Draft number. - Suggest changing "Thu 11/24/2011" to "Thursday 11/24/11". Avoid using the short form of the day. - Suggest changing "OASIS AMQP TC" to "OASIS AMQP Technical Committee", in all occurrences. - Suggest changing "Additional Artifcats" to "Additional Artifacts". - Suggest changing Part 1: Types - "the AMQP type" to "AMQP type". Similarly, in the following bullet items pertaining to Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5. - Footer: Add a space between copyright symbol and "OASIS". :Copyright: - "Please see http://www.oasisopen.org/who/trademark.php (http://www.oasis-open.org/who/trademark.php) for above guidance". The hyperlink is repeated. Need to check with OASIS staff and correct this. Section 3.4: Suggest adding periods after end of each bullet item. Part 4 Transactions: In all figures, the letter 'F' in the term "TRANSFER" uses a different font, and a result appears smaller than the surrounding characters. Suggest fixing this. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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