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Subject: minor editorial suggestions
Line numbers apply to HT specification 471 the way that a human task does. - Are there tasks other than human tasks? 524: In a well-defined order using Routing Patterns (see Routing Patterns) - Reference to Routing Patterns section needed. 853 The attachedBy element indicates who added the attachment. It could be a user, not a group or a list of 854 users or groups. - just write "htt:tUser" since "could be a user" implies that it could also be something also. - same comment for line 891 1074 <xsd:simpleType name="tStatus"> 1075 <xsd:restriction base="xsd:string" /> 1076 </xsd:simpleType> - tStatus would be better defined as a union of xsd:string and tPredefinedStatus. My assumption is that an enum isn't used here to allow for extensions but the result is that tPredefinedStatus isn't referenced explicitly. 1177: For routing tasks his attribute MUST be set to.... - "this", not "his" 1125: Removing closing "/" 1409: This optional attribute specifies the way how sub-tasks are instantiated - remove "how" 1528: double period 1535: (this assignment could have with n potential owners) -- remove "with" or rephrase 1542: I would move this line up above the bullets. I got stuck on 1532-1536 trying to understand the difference between single and all and it would have been much clearer if the notion of separate sub-tasks was stated prior. same comment for Sequential 1549: missing closing element 1584: missing closing element 1628: manual | automatic should be blue 1675: make bullet 1764: reference to list of supported functions? 2290 Start - change to lowercase |
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