RE: Draft 0.3a

[Mark Potts <mark.potts@talkingblocks.com>]

Alastair

Comments in the paper attached... I have, as I said I would, concentrated a
little more in commenting on the ease of understanding from an overview
perspective, with some other comments specific to the protocol and related
to other comments already documented (Sanjay), mainly suggestions however.



-----Original Message-----
From: Sanjay Dalal [mailto:sanjay@bea.com]
Sent: Monday, July 16, 2001 7:32 AM
To: Alastair Green; business-transaction@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: Draft 0.3a


Comments included...

sanjay

----- Original Message -----
From: "Alastair Green" <alastair.green@choreology.com>
To: <business-transaction@lists.oasis-open.org>
Sent: Thursday, July 12, 2001 9:03 AM
Subject: Draft 0.3a


> Hi,
>
> I've done some general housekeeping work on the draft spec, and several
> pages of  overview sections that are worth distributing, so 0.3a is
> attached.
>
> I am working away on further sections (starting with completion of
> Actors, Roles and Relationships, and Terminology, renamed Glossary), and
> will keep feeding these on to the list as 03.b, 0.3c etc. Expect more
> tomorrow.
>
> Sanjay is working on sequence diagrams that will much improve the
> presentation in the sections I've written text on, and I am figuring out
> the technicalities of incorporating these.
>
> Peter is revising the abstract message set and state tables in light of
> Sanjay's simplification while away at an OMG meeting, so should have
> that in place in spec for start of next week.
>
> Yours,
>
> Alastair
>

2001-07-16.OASIS.BTP.Specification.DRAFT.0.31.doc