Re: [camp-comment] 1.8 Normative References, [RFC2616]

[GILBERT PILZ <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>]

Patrick,

I'm a bit puzzled by a few things:

1. You say you are commenting on the Topology and Orchestration Specification for Cloud Applications (TOSCA), yet this is the comment list for the Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) spec.
2. You say the "Normative References" is Section 2.3 but the "Normative References" section of CAMP 1.1 is Section 1.8.

Nevertheless, the substance of your comments agrees with what is in CAMP 1.1. I'm guessing that, in making these comments, you reused an earlier email for TOSCA. Could you confirm that this is the case?

~ gp

On 9/4/2013 12:19 PM, Patrick Durusau wrote:

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Greetings!

On behalf of the Technical Advisory Board (TAB), I have several
comments on Topology and Orchestration Specification for Cloud
Applications Version 1.0.

I will be filing them by separate emails to make them easier to track.

Under 2.3 Normative References, the citation for [RFC 2616] reads:

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[RFC2616] R. Fielding et al, “Hypertext Transfer Protcol – HTTP/1.1”,
IETF RFC 2616, June 1999. http://www.w3.org/Protocols/rfc2616/rfc2616.txt
*****

The canonical citation for RFC2616 given by
http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt, is:

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RFC2616 Fielding, R., Gettys, J., Mogul, J., Frystyk, H., Masinter,
L., Leach, P., and T. Berners-Lee, "Hypertext Transfer Protocol --
HTTP/1.1", RFC 2616, June 1999.
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Inclusion of the hyperlink is find but abbreviations are generally
avoided in formal writing and in standards.

Hope everyone is having a great week!

Patrick

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Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
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