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Subject: Re: [camp-comment] Section 2 Concepts and Types
Patrick, This comment has been captured as Jira issue CAMP-92 and will be processed by the TC. We will inform you when this issue has been resolved. ~ gp On 9/5/2013 8:23 AM, Patrick Durusau
wrote:
-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Greetings! Section 2 begins with this paragraph: ***** This document specifies the self-service management API that a Platform as a Service offering presents to the consumer of the platform. The API is typically the interface into a platform implementation layer that controls the deployment of applications and their use of the platform. ***** "This document...?" cut-n-paste error? "...is typically the interface..." ? Two issues: 1) Hanging paragraphs - If this part of 2 is non-normative (typically) then how do we declare it? If 2 Concepts and Types is declared to be non-normative, does that extend to all of 2? I mention that because there is requirements language (SHALL and SHALL NOT) that occurs in the paragraph prior to 2.2 Deployment. Declaring all of 2 non-normative would exclude those statements from the normative portion of the text. 2) Section 2 reads like non-normative text but as per the existing rule on non-normative text, it is now normative. I hesitate because normative text doesn't use terms like "typically." I can't conform to "typically." Hope everyone is having a great day! Patrick - -- Patrick Durusau patrick@durusau.net Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB) Former Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34 Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps) Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300 Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps) Another Word For It (blog): http://tm.durusau.net Homepage: http://www.durusau.net Twitter: patrickDurusau -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Thunderbird - http://www.enigmail.net/ iQIcBAEBAgAGBQJSKKHoAAoJEAudyeI2QFGo9bUP/3EfMV+qcX2JskY0+6D8aP4y Xg8KY1J8wliSWY21LUafMds5iOVC7JK3cEdrLfQZ6z6U3/I8gu/Y3qyNEuAMhIaX SlqUFpICJxQmEr6+0BX6Lk+6iSSux22edFR398tk9PRYkj6536iUyBQsz3R1LYrj 1U9VpkV5ITmhli4FIJ4heNu0wy7JALc2PeVigL/dRucdDyd85Z+zxvYDml/uNIlF xSNgm3wunHGzJ4slBdrofuKlSyJCqccfGXyNKt8DOktsiYYF6zkweZk5jjBaz5Vk XWHqfeRJpDErubZ0T2Gw0VJTJXsDJSvm2fxpi3k+pALTnJwUJyZauVMP2PEsfmQo dhWfQkiheLgwfcWxP0mjFQCEsXCMZ1OcSLagOAhHN0ZXgRFAlxdQGPKk9BnWpb/A 0K4qMJ+f7yE55b7BHYD/O/DXlJUU8+yROyL4VOsVTExxnJx7n7zsDyWaLITBgKIy qJMzPNDElSxdE0yjszHHc4CFi1ZHkjSnevL4PdDnHmwvLrCnbN4ck//UKi2yR6xz L0FsAjpvMGxOQX8Nes18mPpOeg1GSjZu5qHMSSmuIqAEy9GhAgIrfkyWXRj1Srd0 K/WjQwt6ZdHKRU1D7N+zZEaGgQMuV67C6umKYDt6FAdubId3yd56xZmCqQlshLZt QboDFNWqg14LEAApuLR5 =1ZUs -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- This publicly archived list offers a means to provide input to the OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC. In order to verify user consent to the Feedback License terms and to minimize spam in the list archive, subscription is required before posting. Subscribe: camp-comment-subscribe@lists.oasis-open.org Unsubscribe: camp-comment-unsubscribe@lists.oasis-open.org List help: camp-comment-help@lists.oasis-open.org List archive: http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/ Feedback License: http://www.oasis-open.org/who/ipr/feedback_license.pdf List Guidelines: http://www.oasis-open.org/maillists/guidelines.php Committee: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/camp Join OASIS: http://www.oasis-open.org/join/ |
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