Re: [camp-comment] 4.2 Deployment Plan Overview

[GILBERT PILZ <gilbert.pilz@oracle.com>]

Patrick,

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~ gp

On 9/5/2013 11:33 AM, Patrick Durusau wrote:

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Greetings!

Example 1 in 4.2 Deployment Plan Overview is followed by:

*****
The above example describes an application that consists of a single
RPM package, named ?my-app.rpm?, which exists at the root of the PDP
archive. The services required to install/run this package
and the relationship of this package to those services are not specified.
*****

This reads like non-normative text. I assume it should be a note
(notes to be declared as non-normative) and formatted accordingly.

Or it could be indented under the example to make it typographically
part of the example.

Either way, if it is non-normative, it needs to be so indicated.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

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