Re: [cmis] CMIS work product review

[Al Brown <albertcbrown@us.ibm.com>]

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I'm familiar with rules limiting behavior. :) Here's the zip

(See attached file: CMIS-cd04.zip)

-Al

Al Brown
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Mary McRae ---10/19/2009 11:30:28 AM---Hi Al, I can't take anything out of SVN (not that I'm not capable, but our

From: Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>
To: Al Brown/Costa Mesa/IBM@IBMUS
Cc: <Choy_David@emc.com>, cmis@lists.oasis-open.org, sabine.ocker@oasis-open.org
Date: 10/19/2009 11:30 AM
Subject: Re: [cmis] CMIS work product review

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Hi Al,

  I can't take anything out of SVN (not that I'm not capable, but our rules prevent it). Please export the fixed version of the specification and either attach to email or upload to Kavi.  

Thanks!

Mary




On Oct 19, 2009, at 2:22 PM, Al Brown wrote:

Mary,

The changes are reflected in the specification - http://tools.oasis-open.org/version-control/browse/wsvn/cmis/trunk/Specification/CMIS%20Specification.doc. I was not able to find sample namespace documents under the link you provided. What is necessary for them?

-Al

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<graycol.gif>---10/15/2009 01:45:56 AM---Mary, thank you for your detailed comments/instructions. To our Editors: Please update the spec per

From: <Choy_David@emc.com>
To: <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>, <cmis@lists.oasis-open.org>
Cc: <sabine.ocker@oasis-open.org>
Date: 10/15/2009 01:45 AM
Subject: RE: [cmis] CMIS work product review

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Mary, thank you for your detailed comments/instructions.

To our Editors: Please update the spec per Mary's instructions at your
earliest convenience. Thanks. Since this is primarily a format change to
conform to OASIS requirements, TC voting on these changes is not needed..

To all: Once we revised the spec, we will conduct another formal ballot
to approve it as a Committee Draft, and approve its submission for
Public Review. Thank you for your patience.

BTW, my network connectivity in the next several days is a bit
uncertain. I'll check email whenever I can.

Regards,

david

-----Original Message-----
From: Mary McRae [mailto:mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org]
Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2009 6:25 PM
To: Eric S. Chan; Al Brown
Cc: Sabine Ocker; CMIS List
Subject: [cmis] CMIS work product review

The following issues have been idientified in the submitted work  
products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to
docs.oasis-open.org 
:

1. Creation of a master document (Content Management Interoperability  
Services Version 1.0) that contains all common information and  
references the 3 separate components.

Note all changes in all documents should be accepted before publishing.

----

Domain Model:
1. Title should be as follows:
Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0
Part 1 - Domain Model

2. Status:
Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  
consecutive)

3. Specification URIs
This Version:
Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining
(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 
)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  
the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:
Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:
Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee
Please spell out the full name of the committee; also hypertext link  
should point to TC public home page

5. Related work:
This is meant for related OASIS work only

6. Namespaces:
This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  
templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

7. Abstract:
Remove references to files in svn. Any/all references must be to fixed/
static versions either in docs.oasis-open.org or Kavi.

8. Status:
Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

9. Notices:
Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  
trademarked names and abbreviations here]

No other modifications are allowed to the Notices section. (You might  
want to place CMIS logo usage information in an appendix)

10. Footer:
document identifier should match filename without extension
Date is improperly formatted
Page # of # should be right-justified

11. References
Still contains OASIS boilerplate templates

12. Section 4 Schema
Says placeholder. Recommend moving schema to appendix; note separate  
schema file will take precedence over any schema incorporated into the  
specification file.

13. Conformance Section
Needs to actually be numbered.

14. Acknowledgements:
Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.
Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  
name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  
looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  
or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE-
NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)

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Restful AtomPub Binding
1. Title should be as follows:
Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0
Part 3 - Restful AtomPub Binding

2. Status:
Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  
consecutive)

3. Specification URIs
This Version:
Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining
(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 
)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  
the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:
Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:
Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee
Hypertext link should point to TC public home page

5. Namespaces:
This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  
templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

6. Status:
Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

7. Notices:
Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  
trademarked names and abbreviations here]

8. Footer:
document identifier should match filename without extension
Date is improperly formatted

9. References
Need URL for CMISDM

10. Conformance Section
Needs to actually be numbered.

11. Acknowledgements:
Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.
Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  
name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  
looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  
or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE-
NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)

----

Web Services Binding
1. Title should be as follows:
Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0
Part 2 - Web Services Binding

2. Status:
Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  
consecutive)

3. Specification URIs
This Version:
Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining
(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 
)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  
the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:
Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:
Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee
Hypertext link should point to TC public home page

5. Namespaces:
This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  
templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

6. Status:
Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

7. Notices:
Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  
trademarked names and abbreviations here]

8. Footer:
document identifier should match filename without extension

9. References
Need URL for CMISSCHEMA

Remove boilerplate citation notice

10. Conformance Section
Needs to actually be numbered.

11. Acknowledgements:
Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.
Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  
name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  
looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  
or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE-
NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)




Regards,

Mary

Mary P McRae
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