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Subject: feedback on review items
John and Subcommittee: 1) I have taken a closer look at Scott's LOM metadata work at: http://wiki.oasis-open.org/dita/IMSLOMdesign and see that it is very complete. Nothing has jumped out at me that needs attention. Thanks, Scott. 2) I have reviewed the topic spec indexed at: demo/learningsc/outot/index_topic_elements.html and have the following comments/suggestions/observations: a) demo/learningsc/outot/index_topic_elements.html and demo/learningsc/outot/learningOverview.html: word "as" missing as in: learningOverview topic type ** A Learning Overview topic identifies the learning objectives, includes other information helpful to the learner, such *<as>* prerequisites, duration, intended audience, and can include information and strategies that seeks to gain attention and stimulate recall of prior learning. b) demo/learningsc/outot/learningSummary.html: one word to add that I think would clarity (achievement or accomplishment) as in: learningSummary topic type A Learning Summary recaps and provides context for the *<achievement of>* or *<accomplishment of>* learning objectives, provides guidance to reinforce learning and long-term memory, and may pose questions to enhance encoding and verification of the learning content. c) demo/learningsc/outot/learningAssessment.html: suggested rewording: learningAssessment topic type A Learning Assessment presents instruments *<questions or interactions instead of instruments>* that measure progress, encourage retrieval *<recollection instead of retrieval>*, and stimulate reinforcement of the learning content, and can be presented before the content as a pre-assessment or as a post-assessment test. The interactions use a sub-set of the Question-Test Interoperability (QTI) specification, implemented as a DITA domain specialization. d) demo/learningsc/outot/lcAsset.html: has a blank Example section e) Consistency issue: demo/learningsc/outot/langspec-dita/langref/shortdesc.html, demo/learningsc/outot/langspec-dita/langref/related-links.html, demo/learningsc/outot/learningContentbody.html, demo/learningsc/outot/learningSummarybody.html, demo/learningsc/outot/langspec-dita/langref/related-links.html: are a few of the pages linked to from the syntax links on the topic pages that do not have an example block. f) demo/learningsc/outot/learningBasebody.html: this page has a link with link text "lcAuthorInfo" in the Contains section that has no target page.
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