Re: [Fwd: [dita-learningspec] Groups - draft1_dita_learning_spec.zipuploaded]

[John Accardi <John.Accardi@Sun.COM>]

Thanks, John,

    I've fixed as per your comments 1) and 3).  The paras were in the 
lcIntro and now are in shortdesc.

    WRT 2 ... I'm not sure exactly what we need here.  What is the scope 
of such use cases?  Like how does one communicate (markup) the objective 
of some training?  A broader use case?  Like how to construct a full 
learning object?

    Thanks,
    John



john_hunt@us.ibm.com wrote:
>
> John -
>
> Nice job on these two LOs.
>
> Here are my few comments.
>
> 1) in the problems with structured content topic, make the 
> "Although..." para the short description.
>
> 2) I wonder if any of these problems can translate to use cases for 
> our issue statement?
>
> 3) in the benefits with structured content topic, make "Learning 
> content greatly benefits from being structured." the shortdesc.
>
> John


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