WG: Review complete for "Machine-industry-task domain elements"

["Christian Kravogel" <christian.kravogel@seicodyne.ch>]

I just noticed that these document might not have made their way to you.

 

We are going to discuss them on our meeting.

 

Best regards

 

Chris

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Von: Kristen J Eberlein [mailto:kjeberle@us.ibm.com]
Gesendet: Montag, 29. Dezember 2008 21:54
An: Sloan, Robin
Cc: Christian Kravogel; Robert D Anderson
Betreff: Review complete for "Machine-industry-task domain elements"

Hi, Robin and Christian.

Attached is a CHM and ZIP of the revised files.

(See attached file: MI_alphabetized.chm)(See attached file: MI_alphabetized.zip)

The main things that I noticed were:

1. No content for Attributes section
2. Might you want to clarify the semantic differences between support equipment, supplies, and spares?

I am listed as the reviewer for 
two other sections: Overview and Document Types. Is there anything that I can do 
to help out with those sections? I'd be glad to provide editorial 
support.

Best regards,

Kris

Kristen James 
Eberlein
Advisory Information Developer, IBM Internet Security 
Systems
Secretary, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Home office in Durham, 
NC, USA
Telephone +1 919 682-2290 (UTC/GMT -5 
hours)
kjeberle@us.ibm.com

"Sloan, 
Robin" <rsloan@ptc.com>

"Sloan, Robin" <rsloan@ptc.com>

12/09/2008 11:24 PM

To	"Christian Kravogel" <christian.kravogel@seicodyne.ch>, Robert D Anderson/Rochester/IBM@IBMUS
cc	Kristen J Eberlein/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS
Subject	RE: Langref MachineryTask Domain

I’ve updated the XML files with examples. Please let me 
know if you have any questions. 

Robin

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From: Christian Kravogel 
[mailto:christian.kravogel@seicodyne.ch] 
Sent: Monday, July 
07, 2008 6:39 AM
To: 
'Robert D Anderson'; Sloan, Robin
Subject: Langref MachineryTask 
Domain

Robert, Robin

Enclosed I am sending the langref files from 
the machinerytask domain and the hazard statement domain to you.

Robin:
may I 
ask you to prooveread the descriptions in both zip files
and
may I ask you to add examples to the 
machinerytask domain files.

And please send them directly to Robert when 
they are finished.

Thx a lot


Robert:
The Attribute description, will that be 
automatically filled in by the inheritance information? We have not made any 
modifications on the attributes.

Best regards

Chris

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Eberlein/Raleigh/IBM] [attachment "machinerytask - domain.zip" deleted by 
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MI_alphabetized.chm

MI_alphabetized.zip