Bob et al.
Looks very good. However, can we really say it has no dependencies? Isn't it dependent on Michael Priestley's proposal for the steps domain.
Minor edits
Found one typo on page 16 of the PDF in the same. Find replaceing and change to replacing.
Page 17| extra comma before the word "condition" in troublebody
Page 17| extra comma before the word "condition" in troublebody
Page 18 no commas around "or clarify" in condition
Sorry the clumsy.
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