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Subject: Minor updates to Core W43
Stefan, On a brief review I note the following editorial updates to the DSS Core WD43 which I suggest are incorporated in the next working draft: 1) Front Page Email addresses are needed for the editor / contributors 2) Line 1052 Replace " The following subsections specify the use of RFC 3161 timestamps with CMS signatures and the use of XML Timestamps or RFC 3161 timestamps for both scenarios." With: With "The following subsections specify the use of RFC 3161 timestamps with CMS signatures and the use of XML Timestamps or RFC 3161 timestamps WITH XML SIGNATURE. THESE SUBSECTIONS ADDRESS both scenarios." 3) The changes in http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/email/archives/200606/msg00 014.html (see comments tracking document lines 430-432) Have yet to be added. 4) Line 1555, 1581, 1619 = 4.3.2.x heading The form of these headings is not consistent. Suggest "Processing for [XML ! RFC 3161] timestamp tokens on [CMS ! XML Signatures] Change "time-stamps tokens" to "timestamp tokens"
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