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Subject: FW: DSS Core final changes
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Missed one other change (0) below ALL PLEASE NOTE: ANY CORRECTIONS TO PROBLEMS WITH THE TEXT OR ANY OTHER
EARLIER ACCEPTED COMMENTS THAT HAVE NOT BEEN INCLUDED SHOULD BE PUT ON THE DSS
LIST BY THE END OF THIS WEEK AT THE LATEST The current draft is at: From:
Nick Pope [mailto:nickpope@secstan.com] Stefan & All The following set changes are to be made to the DSS core: 0) new
wordings for sections 4.6.7 and 4.6.9 http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/email/archives/200607/msg00005.html 1) Minor updates as identified in my message: http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/email/archives/200607/msg00024.html 2) Minor comments from Konrad: (attached – have also just forwarded separately to
list) 3) Bug reported by Konrad (attached – have also just forwarded separately to
list) The change needs confirmation) 4) Minor Comments on 3.5.2 by Carlos http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/email/archives/200607/msg00023.html To be refined by Carlos 5) Comments by Carlos http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/email/archives/200607/msg00020.html Discussed at the last DSS TC and to be refined by Carlos We are still aiming for completion of the Core by the end of
the Month. So that we can complete work on the document at next
Mondays Focus meeting: ANY CORRECTIONS TO PROBLEMS WITH THE TEXT OR ANY OTHER
EARLIER ACCEPTED COMMENTS THAT HAVE NOT BEEN INCLUDED SHOULD BE PUT ON THE DSS
LIST BY THE END OF THIS WEEK AT THE LATEST The current draft is at: Nick |
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- From: "Konrad Lanz" <Konrad.Lanz@iaik.tugraz.at>
- To: "Nick Pope" <pope@secstan.com>,"Juan Carlos Cruellas" <cruellas@ac.upc.edu>
- Date: Tue, 11 Jul 2006 12:13:12 +0100
Hi Nick and Juan Carlos, my colleague Harald Bratko thankfully invested some time to read the core protocol and I'd like to communicate some feedback from his review. pls see below, sorry they are just very quick Notes. Change [XMLSIG] to [XMLDSIG]. 311 - 315: Make a forward reference to <Schema>. 344 - 345: Make a Note that ignorePIs and ignoreComments applies to the complete Document not just to the parts before and after the document element. 1436: An omitted <SignatureObject> in this sentence is not very clear. better would be: Either a <SignaturePtr> or a single <InputDocument> and no <SignatureObject> MUST be used ... 1464, 1467: Font of <SignaturePtr>, <Base64XML>, <EscapedXML> is not consistent. Line 314: forward reference to <Schema> 1679: Add a sentence like: The <VerifyManifestResults> is comprised of one or more <ManifestResult>s that contain the following: 1785: Change the words "signing key" against "signature". These following things could be dealt with in the public review. 1848: The text is misleading. --> Eg. CA is trustworthy. 1852: One of the certificates in the chain is revoked 1856: What is a certifying Signature? * ProcessingDetail the following would need to be added: ReferenceHashInvalid SignatureValueInvalid Processing detail should give ds:Reference Level output just as ManifestResult does. -- Konrad Lanz, IAIK/SIC - Graz University of Technology Inffeldgasse 16a, 8010 Graz, Austria Tel: +43 316 873 5547 Fax: +43 316 873 5520 https://www.iaik.tugraz.at/aboutus/people/lanz http://jce.iaik.tugraz.at Certificate chain (including the EuroPKI root certificate): https://europki.iaik.at/ca/europki-at/cert_download.htmbegin:vcard fn:Konrad Lanz n:Lanz;Konrad org:IAIK/SIC;Java Security adr:http://jce.iaik.tugraz.at;;Inffeldgasse 16a;Graz;Styria;8010;Austria email;internet:Konrad.Lanz@iaik.tugraz.at title:Bakk.techn.,BSc Hons tel;work:+43 316 873 5547 x-mozilla-html:FALSE url:http://www.iaik.tu-graz.ac.at/aboutus/people/lanz version:2.1 end:vcard--- End Message ---
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