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Subject: RE: Added NCA, KorBIT and Drake slides to XML2003 presentation
Mike:
My
comments on slides:
-
slide #1 a bit too dense: we don't need to list all ebXML TCs in detail, or
repeat full name of IIC.
1st
bullet could be: "provide guidelines for ebXML implementation and
deployment."
3rd
bullet could be: "allows vendors to define common conformance and interop test
standards."
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slide #2: bullet #1: add conformance to interoperability.
- in
title, "ebXML" should come just after OASIS.
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slide #9 is too busy: won't be readable I suspect. We could either use 1 slide
per architecture ,
or
just show separately the architectures relevant to what DC and NCA will
actually test (I guess only thre).
So we
could use the appropriate architecture slide at time each participant is
introduced.
-
slide #11, bullet #2: we should not say "require", but rather "can be automated
using", or just "automated".
-
slide #16: DC only demonstrate the OAG (we can add verbally that they also have
done ebMS conf.)
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slides #14 15: font too small.
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slide #18: bullet #2: we should not say "Acting as a hub", as it suggests that
operating a testbed is in our
IIC
charter, which is not the case. "Supporting" , "promoting" or "designing" is
more in line with IIC mission.
Regards,
jacques
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