RE: [election-services] EML Implementation Guide

["Paul Spencer" <paul.spencer@boynings.co.uk>]

David,

 

I think we are talking about different documents. This was John's EML Implementation Guide, rather than the WOTE paper.

 

Regards

 

Paul

-----Original Message-----
From: David RR Webber (XML) [mailto:david@drrw.info]
Sent: 01 June 2006 17:00
To: Paul Spencer
Cc: eml; John Borras
Subject: RE: [election-services] EML Implementation Guide

Paul,

 

Actually John has to remove a couple of pages already because of their restriction on 8 page limit.  So we can actually add more in - one page summarizing all the schemas and their purpose - and then the other showing the XML structure for the 440 cast vote were cut.

 

I'd suggest adding more pages to round out the overall as well - including some of the process diagrams from the spec' would be helpful - we did not really touch on the operational aspects of managing an election.

 

Thanks, DW

-------- Original Message --------
Subject: [election-services] EML Implementation Guide
From: "Paul Spencer" <paul.spencer@boynings.co.uk>
Date: Thu, June 01, 2006 11:06 am
To: "John Borras" <johnaborras@yahoo.co.uk>
Cc: "eml" <election-services@lists.oasis-open.org>

John,

This looks like a good paper. I am wondering whether it is a bit long as an
introduction, or rather short as a detailed implementation guide. It seems
closer to the former, in which case I think I would take out the rather busy
diagrams. I have less detailed versions if you think something is needed. In
this case, I might move the Terminology section later as well.

In terms of detail, at an editorial level, I would remove the "eg"s and use
words like "such as" instead. CORE was also renamed a while ago as the
Co-ordinated Online Record (not Register) of Electors.

Regards

Paul Spencer
Director
Boynings Consulting Ltd
http://boynings.co.uk


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