Re: [election-services] EML TOP REASONS DOCUMENT - FINAL APPROVAL

[Richard J Cardone <richcar@us.ibm.com>]

John,

The document is polished and very appealing.
 Here are some typographical checks and minor text changes that might
be considered:

1. Page 2, the "As an Election Administrator" heading appears to be in a larger font than the other headings on the same page.
2. Page 2, the 3rd bullet under "As an Election Manager" uses a different font for the last two letters of the last word ("solution").
3. Page 3, heading 1 can be shortened to "Verifiable Elections and Referendums".
4. Page 3, heading 1, bullet 3, might read, "Allows end-to-end implementation of audit and control mechanisms".
5. Page 3, heading 3, can be shortened to "Supports Paper and Electronic Ballots".
6. Page 3, heading 4, bullet 1 should be split into 2 bullets at the semi-colon.  

Rich

John Borras <johnaborras@yahoo.co.uk>

11/30/2008 05:52 AM

To	EML TC <election-services@lists.oasis-open.org>
cc	Carol Geyer <carol.geyer@oasis-open.org>
Subject	[election-services] EML TOP REASONS DOCUMENT - FINAL APPROVAL

Following some very good design work by David W we've
now come up the attached as the final version of the Top Reasons document.
 The text is as per the last round of discussions; all that's changed
now is the layout and presentation.
 
We've debated this at length over the last few weeks and
therefore I don't see the need to hold a formal ballot to approve it's
publication. So unless I hear any objections by the end of this week, ie
by 5th December, I'll go ahead and publish it on the TC website and other
OASIS outlets.  I hope you will also send it to your contacts. 
 
Thanks to all for the input, I think we now have a very
good publicity document that will help sell our message.
 
Regards
John 


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