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Subject: Fwd: CAP 1.0 edits
Forwarding for the record this note received recently. - Art >Subject: CAP 1.0 edits >Date: Mon, 6 Sep 2004 15:01:39 -0500 >From: "Todd Enneking" <TEnneking@Cleo.com> >To: <acb@incident.com> > >This is an excellent document and protocol. We >are in the process of reviewing our support for >CAP within our Communications products (mass >messaging via voice, fax, e-mail with RSVP >capability, etc.). > >During my review of the CAP 1.0 standard, I >found a few anomalies that I wanted to point >out. You may have already received these and are >simply waiting for enough real changes prior to >releasing a new version. But in case you haven't >identified all of these, here they areŠ > >Page 1: >The sentence "To subscribe, send an email >message to >emergency-comment-request@lists.oasis-open.org >with the word "subscribe" as the body of the >message." Should be changed to "To subscribe, >send an email message to >subscribe@lists.oasis-open.org with an empty >subject and body of the message.". > >Page 3, section 1.2: >"though" should be changed to "through". > >Page 15: >In the following sentence "not" should be >changed to "no": "(2) If this item is not >provided, each recipient is free to set its own >policy as to when the message is not longer in >effect.". > >Page 19: >In the following sentence "altitude" should be >changed to "ceiling": "(2) The altitude measure >is in feet above mean sea level (per WGS-84 >datum).". > >Page 20: >"WGS 84" should be changed to "WGS-84". > > > >Todd Enneking >Vice President, Engineering & IT >Cleo Communications / Streem Communications ><mailto:TEnneking@cleo.com>TEnneking@cleo.com >815-282-7655 >
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