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My
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Page |
Document Line
or Table Cell |
Observation |
Recommendation / Comments |
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1 |
5 |
Document Line 29 |
Typo |
“Section 1.2” should be “Section 1.3” |
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2 |
5 |
Document Line 39 |
Typo? |
Should CMAS be “Alerting” as here, or “Alert” as Page 6, Line 52? [see #3 below] |
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3 |
6 |
Document Line 52 |
Typo? |
Should CMAS be “Alert” as here, or “Alerting” as Page 5, Line 39? [see #2 above] |
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4 |
9&11 |
“sent”, “status”, and “resourceDesc”
table cells. |
Clarification |
Why are the words “sent”, “status”, and “resourceDesc” bolded?
Need explanation on Page 11, Document Line 173? |
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5 |
9 |
“status” Non-Normative table cell |
Typo? |
Text should start with “(1)”?
Also, messages” should be messages’. |
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6 |
9 |
“info” Normative table cell |
Typo? |
Should “(2)” and “(3)” instead be “(1)” and “(2)”? |
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7 |
9 |
“info” Non-Normative table cell |
Clarification |
In (2), what is meant by “IPAWS System Partners”? Or should it be IPAWS Exchange Partners? |
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8 |
10 |
“eventCode” Normative table cell |
Clarification |
In (3), is “EAS CAP Profile” the proper term? |
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9 |
10 |
“eventCode” Normative table cell |
Clarification |
In (3), regarding “approved by the FCC”. How is one to know which special codes are approved by the FCC? I believe ECIG just said if it is a 3-letter code, pass it on. |
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10 |
10 |
“parameter” Normative table cell |
Conflict |
(1) says EAS-ORG required for HazCollect, but Page 16, “parameter” HazCollect table cell does not list EAS-ORG as required. Doesn’t NWS CRS assume ORG = CIV? |
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11 |
10 |
“parameter” Normative table cell |
Conflict |
There is no mention here of the EAS-STN-ID parameter, but on Page 16, “parameter” EAS table cell, it says EAS-STN-ID is required. |
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12 |
11 |
“resourceDesc” Normative table cell |
Conflict |
This uses value of “EAS Broadcast Content”. Page 17, “resourceDesc” EAS table cell uses values of “EAS Audio” and “EAS Streaming Audio”. Is this a conflict? |
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13 |
11 |
“geocode” Normative table cell |
Typo |
“territoriy” should be “territory” or “territories”. |
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14 |
12 |
Document Line 183 |
Typo? |
Should “The two” be “The three”? |
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15 |
15 |
“note” EAS table cell |
Error |
The “Ignored:” Note goes with a msgType of Error, not Ack. The EAS cell should be reworded to:
If msgType is “Ack”, should include “Accepted:” or “Aired on:” plus station callsign. If msgType is “Error”, should include “Error:” or “Ignored:”. |
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16 |
16 |
“eventCode” CMAS table cell |
Conflict |
This table “recommends” that an eventCode be used for CMAS, but Page 10, “eventCode” Normative table cell, (1) says CMAS “MUST” include an eventCode. |
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17 |
16 |
“expires” CMAS table cell |
Typo? |
Should “4.” and “5.” be “1.” and “2.”? |
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18 |
17 |
“mimeType” EAS table cell |
Typo |
Add superscript “TM” (“trademark”) after Shoutcast and Icecast.
Also, word “service” should be “type-service”. |
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19 |
17 |
identifier, sent, status, msgType, source, scope, certainty, eventCode, expires, senderName CAP Element table cells |
Clarification |
All of these are bolded.
Should there be an explanation on Page 17, Document Line 233 as to why they are bolded? |
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20 |
19 |
Last line of Revision History table |
Clarification |
Should “PR 02” be “PR 01”? |