10 Comments in response to 15-day Public Review for CAP-AU Profile [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

["Trott, Gregory" <Gregory.Trott@ag.gov.au>]

UNCLASSIFIED

OASIS,

 

The following 10 corrections need to be incorporated into the final version of the CAP-AU Profile document.  These are all considered MINOR changes that DO NOT impact the content of the document; therefore, a third public review period should not be required.

 

1) Page 5: The LAYER paragraph in lines 37-41 has been made redundant by similar words already appearing in the revised lines 53-65.  This is related to JW Issue #1) that is documented in Profiles SC Meeting Notes 30 Jan 2012, and Comment ID 26 in the comments spreadsheet.  I can now see that we obviously neglected to remove the redundant rows 37-41 when we accepted Jacob Westfall's corrections for lines 56-57.

 

2) Page 6:  Please replace the exiting date in line 71 (i.e. 30 June 2011) with  the revised date for the publication: 28 February 2012. The CAP-AU-STD AUeventLIST publication has been revised since the EM-TC voted on the WD04 document on 14 Feb 2012. 

 

3) Page 7: Please replace the exiting date in line 107 (i.e. 30 June 2011) with  the revised date for the publication: 28 February 2012.  The CAP-AU-STD publication has been revised since the EM-TC voted on the WD04 document on 14 Feb 2012.

 

4) Pages 9 - 33: Correct the formatting of the footers on the landscaped pages to spread the footer information across the full width of the page.

 

5) Page 12: Separate Notes 1) and 2) by the same white space as used in all other areas to separate the individual Notes.

 

6) Page 13: In Example A, the <expires> timezone is incorrect as the example is required to show 0001UTC or ...T00:01:00-00:00...(the example currently shows ...T00:01:00+09:30...).

 

7) Page 28: Change the font style and colour of <parameter> Notes 2) and 3) to match all other notes in the document, as these notes currently appear in blue text and a different font to all other Notes in the document. 

 

8) Page 30: Minor typo in the phrase "Intergovernmental Committee of Surveying and Mapping" - the word "of" needs to be changed to "on" - see http://www.icsm.gov.au/ for verification of this correction. 

 

9) Page 32 & 33: The font style in all web URLs in the document is NOT appearing consistently.  Currently, the "//www" is showing as a different style to the remainder of the URL in the majority of the addresses.  Please change the font style and size for all web URLs in the document to be consistent with the existing document styles.

 

10) For consistency, the following instances of web URLs will need to be re-inserted as blue text with underlined hyperlinks in the final document:

Page 6: line 73: http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-2/#dateTime, W3C REC-xmlschema-2

Page 6: Line 87: http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2141.txt

Page 7: Line 91: http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3121.txt

Page 32: Note 2) http://www.psma.com.au/products/gnaf.html

Page 32: Note 3.a) http://www.iso.org/iso/country_codes.htm

Page 33: Note 3.b) http://www.ga.gov.au/place-name/

Page 33: Note 3.c) http://www.psma.com.au/products/postcodeboundaries.html

Page 34: Line 182-183: http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/cap/v1.2/

 

 

Greg Trott

CAP-AU Project Manager

Australian Government Attorney-General's Department

 

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