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Subject: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3


HI folks,

I thought I would give you and update and my Notes--all 4 pages 
(though 1.25 or so is a paste from a technical styling source 
reference). I will take another last look at it in the morning before 
I upload it. I went over the whole thing with a very fine-tooth comb, 
back-to-back looooong days, and I have one version which I can 
upload, the redline version of that, and another version with 
suggested stylistic consistency plus the standard edits. We have some 
decisions we can choose to make, or defer since this is, after all, a 
Public Review draft.

Thanks to all!
Rex

At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>Hi Folks,
>
>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 3.11.3. They repeat each 
>other and somewhat contradict each other. I'm not going to stop or 
>change it since this is taking longer than I thought it would. I'm 
>keeping a page of notes on things that I think need to be looked 
>over but this is the first one that actually caused me to stop long 
>enough to send out a message about it. I have incorporated everyone 
>else's proofing, so if you find anything, please keep a list and 
>check the next version I post against your list, since it would not 
>be a good idea for me to stop and rewind now that I'm going through 
>it in great detail.
>
>
>Cheers,
>Rex
>--
>Rex Brooks
>President, CEO
>Starbourne Communications Design
>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>Berkeley, CA 94702
>Tel: 510-898-0670
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Rex Brooks
President, CEO
Starbourne Communications Design
GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
Berkeley, CA 94702
Tel: 510-898-0670

NotesOnFinalEdit-01-28-08.doc



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