Another Note: Re: [emergency] Fwd: [emergency-msg] Groups - CAPv1.2 SC Working Draft 04 to 05 (emergency-CAPv1.2

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Hi Again,

I neglected to respond to 1), 2), and 3) because I'm not editing the 
document, just giving advice.

However, I should at least respond where I can, so on:

The Redline: Jacob is doing battle with Word to produce a more 
readable version, having to recreate the changes from scratch since I 
don't know of a way to produce a tracked changes from the clean 
version.

1): I thought Jacob's suggestion that the inclusion of the dateTime 
type in the normative reference was in line with the change we made 
in the profile. I'm not claiming to be an authority, so if anyone has 
a different opinion, please let us know and we can discuss it.

2): Couldn't find a section 2.6? or 3.6, and quotes in 1.6 appear to 
be the same as in the DateTime Data Type in the 
CAP-v1.1-IPAWS-Profile-PR01 section 1.3.

3) Yup.

So now, I think I've replied as best I can.

Cheers,
Rex

At 10:30 AM -0700 4/23/09, Art Botterell wrote:
>Rex / Jacob -
>
>I'm having some difficulty making sense of that redline, 
>particularly in the Data Dictionary section 3.2.  It appears that 
>virtually everything in that section has been modified, which I'm 
>sure isn't actually the case.  I wonder if it might be possible to 
>get a redline version with just the actual changes in red?
>
>Meanwhile, four specific observations:
>
>1) Is the explicit definition of the dateTime type usage really a 
>Normative Reference (section 1.6)?
>
>2) Why are we adding quotes around the language in section 2.6? 
>What's being quoted?
>
>3) Obviously the Acknowlegements section isn't finished.
>
>4) Why are all the "By Whom" values other than Jacob Westfall 
>removed from the Change History?
>
>- Art
>
>
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>>>>  Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com> 4/23/2009 6:03 AM >>>
>Hi Folks,
>
>I'm also forwarding this notification of the upload and availability
>of the "redline" version of document we will discuss in next week's
>TC meeting. That's why the filename indicates "04-to-05."
>
>I'm doing this because I gave Jacob some erroneous information
>yesterday.  This is the "redline" version of the document (with
>tracked changes) which we will discuss in next Tuesday's TC meeting.
>I have also forwarded the "clean" document notification.
>
>I neglected to notice that document-upload email notification is only
>shared with the groups listed in the Sharing row of the document
>submission form when the checkbox with the label "All groups with
>whom this document is shared." is checked in the Email Notifications
>section.
>
>My bad, so I'm forwarding this to the TC list and will also forward
>the companion document.
>
>Apologies to Jacob,
>Rex
>
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>>Document Description:
>>This is a marked up version of working draft 05 showing the changes made
>>since the 04 version that was approved for submission to the TC by the SC.
>>Note that in the data dictionary, small changes like spaces or a period
>  >added/removed does result in the whole section being redlined due to how
>>Word shows the changes.
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