RE: [emergency] DE Basics Paper Ver 04-1

[Elysa Jones <ejones@warningsystems.com>]

These corrections have been made and the document will be forwarded 
to the EI MS today.  Thank you, Elysa

At 03:04 PM 8/13/2009, Patrick Gannon wrote:

>Jeff,
>
>Great job you and the other editors have done on this paper.  I went 
>back through and re-read and found a few edits that need to be made.
>
>1. Shouldn't the date of the document be the date when the document 
>is approved by the TC?
>
>2. Some of the other standards names needed editing.
>
>3. The URL for the ISO 639 Code Table was incorrect, and that has 
>been updated.
>
>I trust is you review the edits in the attached version, you will 
>find them acceptable.
>
>
>Best regards,
>
>Patrick Gannon
>President & COO
>Warning Systems, Inc.
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>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: jeff.waters@navy.mil [mailto:jeff.waters@navy.mil]
>Sent: Tuesday, August 11, 2009 7:25 AM
>To: emergency@lists.oasis-open.org
>Subject: [emergency] DE Basics Paper Ver 04-1
>
>A draft version of the DE Basics paper has been uploaded to the EM 
>TC Documents Outreach folder for your consideration prior to the 
>next EM TC meeting.  This version (04-1) includes the changes 
>approved by the Infrastructure Subcommittee.  The link to the 
>document is provided below.
>
>http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/emergency/download.php/33721/EDXL-DE-Basics-WD04-1.doc
>
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