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Subject: Public Review comments - emix-v1.0-csprd02

From: Paul Knight <paul.the.knight@gmail.com>
To: emix-comment@lists.oasis-open.org
Date: Thu, 26 May 2011 23:39:52 -0400

Hi all,

Attached are mostly editorial comments on obvious items.  Not all were
changed from the first Public Review. It is hoped that these will be
accepted in the spirit of improving the specification.

Line numbers are those of the PDF version.

Kind regards,
Paul Knight, Individual OASIS Member.

emix-PR-comments.doc

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