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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (EMIX-347) Editorial issues, Section1, wd22-with-change.doc
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-347?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] William Cox updated EMIX-347: ----------------------------- Parent: EMIX-346 Issue Type: Sub-task (was: Improvement) > Editorial issues, Section 1, wd22-with-change.doc > ------------------------------------------------- > > Key: EMIX-347 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-347 > Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: spec > Reporter: Anne Hendry > Assignee: William Cox > > General issue > ============= > Many, many occurrences of different forms of > "Energy Market Information Exchange Technical Committee", > "Technical Committee", > " (TC)", "(EMIX)", "(EMIX TC)", etc. > throughout the document. > Short form sometimes used before full term is expressed. > Define once long form with acronym at the start. Just use abbreviation thereafter. > Specific line # issues > ====================== > Line 5-6 > -------- > Delete the first sentence. > Half of it is vague and the other half duplicates the next sentence. > Line 194 > -------- > "... the standards listed in listed in the normative or non-normative ..." > 'listed in' written 2x, remove one 'listed in'. > Lines 196 and 310 > ----------------- > Duplicate information. > Delete these two lines and move that information to > heading of the 'Examples' section > and any other sections that are non-normative (eg. appendices). > 'Ancillary Services' appendix already does this. > Line 291 > -------- > Delete. Redundant. > Lines 292 - 293 > --------------- > Replace with > "EMIX element and attribute names follow Lower Camel Case (LCC) convention." > Lines 295 - 296 > --------------- > Replace with > "EMIX type names follow the UpperCamelCase (UCC) naming convention." > Line 296 > -------- > Make the rule about appending the word 'Type' to the end of type names > a separate sentence so you're not mixing the rules together. Will make > it easier for people to see and read that. > Lines 305 - 307 > --------------- > Delete. Doesn't have to do with the section subject ('editing conventions'). > Or ... > First sentence could be moved to section on 'transactive state'. > Third sentence could be moved to section on 'inheritance'. > Middle sentence stays deleted. > Lines 308 - 309 > --------------- > Delete. No longer relevant. > Lines 315 - 319 > --------------- > Delete. > Replace with > "EMIX specification uses the common market terms as defined in Table 3-6: > Transactive States Enumeration." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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