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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (EMIX-471) CLONE -Editorial notesfor WD29
CLONE -Editorial notes for WD29 ------------------------------- Key: EMIX-471 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-471 Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC Issue Type: Improvement Components: spec Affects Versions: wd29 Environment: Gerald Gray Reporter: Gerald Gray Assignee: Aaron Snyder Priority: Minor Fix For: wd31 Table 3-4 Gluon definition - remove the word "is" Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability Ln. 165 - 166 For this version, this rule results namespaces indicated in (duplicate line - the line and thought appear to be completed below this) Ln . 172 Change: We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy. To: Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified. Ln. 392 delete "it" Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is" Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID" Ln 506 remove the comma Ln 544 change "and" to "an" Ln 550 change "he" to "are the" (? Not sure - perhaps something else is intended) Ln 565 the first sentence makes no sense; not sure what is intended here Ln 571 insert "which" before "is" Ln 586 plurality of this sentence does not match Ln 603 change "my" to "may" Ln 629-630 national international - don't agree in scope; may want to rewrite Ln 632 change "A" to lower case Ln 637 delete "to" Ln 663 "below," is repeated Ln 671 8.2.1 title is a bit long Ln 743 change All to lowercase a Table 10-4 Consumption ceiling, have both "is" and "are" Ln 946 IEC 61970 is not a subcommittee, but rather, one of the standards specified by TC57. Specifically IEC 61970-301 describes resources in detail. Ln 1138 change "In this section we recapitulate the rules that define inheritance including direction in WS-Calendar To "The rules that define inheritance, including direction in WS-Calendar, are recapitulated" Ln 1158 there is a space after the comma following "prototypical" Ln 1188 "What are the rules?" (is this a note to self?) Appendix B. Extensibility - instead of saying "looks like this", we may want to use, "example of" Ln 1379-1380 change to "The non-normative white paper on the use of the WS-Calendar published by that committee provides a basis of understanding for that specification." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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