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Subject: [public review comments] TC Admin comments on Energy Market Information Exchange (EMIX) Version 1.0
Members of the Energy Market Information Exchange (EMIX) TC, TC Administration provides the following comments for the public review of the above Committee Specification Drafts. Comments are divided between fixes required to conform to the TC Process requirements and general observations. The public review was announced on 04 October 2011. (http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/201110/msg00003.html) Required: - We noted no issues that require fixing. General: The following items were observed in the content. These do not require correcting but we provide them for your consideration. 1. Normative and non-normative references to other OASIS documents do not use OASIS recommended format: Normative references: - SOA-RM OASIS Standard, OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture 1.0, October 2006 http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/ - WS-Calendar OASIS Committee Specification 1.0, WS-Calendar, July 2011, http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.pdf Non-normative: - TeMIX Transactive Energy Market Information Exchange [TeMIX] an approved Note of the EMIX TC. Ed Cazalet et al. http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf - WS-Calendar Note OASIS Committee Note Public Review Draft, WS-Calendar Conceptual Overview, http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf The citation construction that we use for OASIS documents is: [CITATION-LABEL] Work Product title (italicized). Approval date (DD Month YYYY). Stage Identifier and Revision Number (e.g., Committee Specification Draft 01). Principal URI (version-specific URI, e.g., including the filename component with stage and revision: /somespec-v1.0-csd01.html). For current specifications, we include these in the cite-as section of the cover pages. So, for SOA-RM (which is an older spec and does not include a 'cite-as' entry), the format would be: [SOA-RM] <ital>Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture 1.0</ital>. 12 October 2006. OASIS Standard. http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/soa-rm.html For WS-Calendar: [WS-Calendar] <ital>WS-Calendar Version 1.0</ital>. 30 July 2011. OASIS Committee Specification 01. http://docs.oasisopen.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.html. For TeMIX: [TeMIX-Information-Model] <ital>Transactional Energy Market Information Exchange (TeMIX); An Information Model for Energy Transactions in the Smart Grid</ital>. 23 May 2010. Committee White Paper. http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf For the WS-Calendar note, the citation form would be: [WS-Calendar-Overview] <ital>Conceptual Overview of WS-Calendar CD01</ital>. 15 September 2010. Committee Note Public Review Draft. http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf 2. There is a non-normative reference to a document with a broken URI: NIEM NIEM Technical Architecture Committee (NTAC), National Information Exchange Model Naming and Design Rules v1.3, October 2008, http://www.niem.gov/pdf/NIEM-NDR-1-3.pdf 3. The namespace document referenced in line 159 (PDF) no longer exists. The text is: "… of this document at http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/emix/2011/ will change accordingly. " 4. LIne 269 (PDF) refers to an appendix which no longer exists, at least in its earlier location or form: The text is: "… [WS-Calendar] semantics is provided in Appendix E." Please let us know if you have any questions on any of these. -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-378-3472 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn: http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter: http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook: http://facebook.com/oasis.open
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