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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (EMIX-537) TC Admin comments on PR04
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-537?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Toby Considine updated EMIX-537: -------------------------------- Fix Version/s: wd38 (was: errata for CS01) > TC Admin comments on PR04 > ------------------------- > > Key: EMIX-537 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-537 > Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Affects Versions: CSD04/PR04 > Environment: PR04 Comments TC Admin > Reporter: William Cox > Assignee: William Cox > Fix For: wd38 > > > Insert link to email > TC Administration provides the following comments for the public > review of the above Committee Specification Drafts. Comments are > divided between fixes required to conform to the TC Process > requirements and general observations. The public review was announced > on 04 October 2011. > (http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/201110/msg00003.html) > Required: > - We noted no issues that require fixing. > General: > The following items were observed in the content. These do not require > correcting but we provide them for your consideration. > 1. Normative and non-normative references to other OASIS documents do > not use OASIS recommended format: > Normative references: > - SOA-RM OASIS Standard, OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented > Architecture 1.0, October 2006 http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/ > - WS-Calendar OASIS Committee Specification 1.0, WS-Calendar, July > 2011, http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.pdf > Non-normative: > - TeMIX Transactive Energy Market Information Exchange [TeMIX] an > approved Note of the EMIX TC. Ed Cazalet et al. > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf > - WS-Calendar Note OASIS Committee Note Public Review Draft, > WS-Calendar Conceptual Overview, > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf > The citation construction that we use for OASIS documents is: > [CITATION-LABEL] > Work Product title (italicized). Approval date (DD Month YYYY). Stage > Identifier and Revision Number (e.g., Committee Specification Draft > 01). Principal URI (version-specific URI, e.g., including the filename > component with stage and revision: /somespec-v1.0-csd01.html). > For current specifications, we include these in the cite-as section of > the cover pages. > So, for SOA-RM (which is an older spec and does not include a > 'cite-as' entry), the format would be: > [SOA-RM] > <ital>Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture 1.0</ital>. 12 > October 2006. OASIS Standard. > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/soa-rm.html > For WS-Calendar: > [WS-Calendar] > <ital>WS-Calendar Version 1.0</ital>. 30 July 2011. OASIS Committee > Specification 01. > http://docs.oasisopen.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.html. > For TeMIX: > [TeMIX-Information-Model] > <ital>Transactional Energy Market Information Exchange (TeMIX); An > Information Model for Energy Transactions in the Smart Grid</ital>. 23 > May 2010. Committee White Paper. > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf > For the WS-Calendar note, the citation form would be: > [WS-Calendar-Overview] > <ital>Conceptual Overview of WS-Calendar CD01</ital>. 15 September > 2010. Committee Note Public Review Draft. > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf > 2. There is a non-normative reference to a document with a broken URI: > NIEM NIEM Technical Architecture Committee (NTAC), National > Information Exchange Model Naming and Design Rules v1.3, October 2008, > http://www.niem.gov/pdf/NIEM-NDR-1-3.pdf > 3. The namespace document referenced in line 159 (PDF) no longer > exists. The text is: "... of this document at > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/emix/2011/ will change accordingly. " > 4. LIne 269 (PDF) refers to an appendix which no longer exists, at > least in its earlier location or form: The text is: "... [WS-Calendar] > semantics is provided in Appendix E." > Please let us know if you have any questions on any of these. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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