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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (ENERGYINTEROP-445) W24 MiscEditorial
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-445?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=26296#action_26296 ] Toby Considine commented on ENERGYINTEROP-445: ---------------------------------------------- Modified from Description; all evaluated by WTC. Propose applying all but those with negative instructions in ALL CAPS. 476 add "a" before "seller" tc>> done 476 change "the" to "a" tc>> done 477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer" tc>> done 501 move "is" from before parenthetical remark to just before "called" tc>> done 525 :insert space after "Table" separating from "5" -- NOTE THIS MAY BE CORRECTED BY THE GENERAL FIX CAPTIONS ITEM tc>> done 562 What does "transactioned resources" mean: just say "resource" AGREE. TRANSACTIONED SEEMS TO SUGGEST "a resource that is subject to transactive or event interaction"? tc>> pending further conversation 590 change "transactional" to "transactive" tc>> done 519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery" tc>> done (assuming this was 619) 617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time". tc>> done 619 change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power" tc>> done 649 change "replication" to "repetition" tc>> done 651. delete "specific response rates" NOT SURE ABOUT THIS ONE. "SPECIFIED RATES" as for 652? tc>> done >> specific Rates 652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval" tc>> done >> TeMIX defines communications for transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an specific intervals. 716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers" SHOULD BE "SUPPLIERS AND CONSUMERS" rather than CUSTOMERS AND SUPPLIERS IN MY OPINION tc >> We've hashed this out before. We have Buyers and Sellers. THe paragraph before has a call-out to customers because it only makes sense with premioses equipment. 719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller. THIS WAS LOOKING UP FROM THE VTN AND THE VEN; COULD BE REWORDED BUT "CONTROLLER" IS NOT THE RIGHT WORD. 719. Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly. ...OR PROVIDES DISTRIBUTED ENERGY RESOURCES... to discussion on 719: If the VEN participates in a demand response program or provides distributed energy resources, its ESI is the interface to at least one dispatchable resource (Resource), that is, to a single logical entity. A Resource may or may not expose any fine structure. The Resource terminology and the duality of generation and curtailment are from [EMIX]. Under a demand response program, a Resource is capable of shedding load in response to Demand Response Events, Electricity Price Signals or other system events (e.g. detection of under-frequency). The VTN can query the actual state of a Resource with the EiFeedback service and request ongoing information. The VEN can query the status of the VTN-VEN relationship using the EiStatus service. Alternatively, a Resource may provide generation in response to similar information. The net effect is the same. 739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for. CORRECT. SUGGEST DELETING. This is likely an application supporting ASHRAE SPC201P > W24 Misc Editorial > ------------------ > > Key: ENERGYINTEROP-445 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-445 > Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: spec > Affects Versions: wd24 > Environment: Ed Cazalet > Reporter: Edward Cazalet > Assignee: Toby Considine > Fix For: wd25 > > > Miscellaneous Editorial on WD24 > 476 add "a" before "seller" > 476 change "the" to "a: > 477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer" > 501 add "is" before "called" > 525 :insert space after "Table" > 562 What does "transactioned resources" mean: just say "resource" > 590 change "transactional" to "transactive" > 519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery" > 617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time". > 619 change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power" > 649 change "replication" to "repetition" > 651. delete "specific response rates" > 652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval" > 716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers" > 719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller. > 719. Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly. > 739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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