Re: [entity-resolution] draft blurb for the vote [was: minutes frommeeting 20050823]

[Jirka Kosek <jirka@kosek.cz>]

Lauren Wood wrote:

> Next version, to get rid of the split infinitive I added... any more 
> comments?

That reminds me, that I should look into some grammar book what that 
split infinitive is ;)

>    2. External identifiers may require protocols that are not accessible 
> to all of the tools on a single computer system. An external identifier 
> that is addressed with the ftp: protocol, for example, is not accessible 

I would prefer "FTP protocol", as "ftp:" is technically just name of URL 
scheme.

Otherwise excellent work, thanks!

					Jirka

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