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Subject: FWSI - IMSC: suggestion for revisions and comments
A little later than intended, but here are a couple of modifications I would suggest before making this public (The changes are included in the attached document): - [p 7]Update list of figures (undefined bookmarks) - [p 8, l 224] Origninal: formalization of a Web service implementation lifecycle and defining the Web service specific Changed: formalization of a Web service implementation lifecycle and defining Web service specific - [p 8, l 250-264] Several small modifications to the section 1.3.1 - [p 10, l 323-324] It is not quite clear what is meant by assimilate in this sentence. Needs some rewording. - [p 12, l 426 - 427] Inserted the word "typically" and a footnote. -[p 12, l 429] "A Web service ..." Here are some more general comments: -The Web service cycle is just like any generic development cycle --> Question: There are no new phases in the process, nor a different order? - The V-model is also very generic. It really does not tell the reader anything that is particular to Web services. Does this add value to the document? - What is the source of the two figures (life cycle and V-model). We may have to clear about from where we got them. Is this in the RUP documentation? - We are currently listing all the typical activities and add some description of how they apply to Web services. Is there are way to highlight the activities that are paricularly important or different in the context of Web services? - From reading this document I get the impression that this is document is biased towards Web service providers. This may lead into a more philosophical discussion, but I would argue that providing Web services (possibly within a SOA) is quite different compared to a Web service consumer buidling composite applications from available Web services. This perhaps just something we need to be clear about, as there may be important differences as far as the software development methodology is concerned. Any comments welcome! - How far along are we with incorporting any other comments we got for this document? I am still working on the questions for the survey, but hope to be able to send you something by the beginning of next week. Regards, Marc __________________________________ Marc N. Haines, Ph.D. Assistant Professor School of Business Administration University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee P.O. Box 742 Milwaukee WI 53201-0742 phone: (414) 229 3773 fax: (414) 229 5999 email: mhaines@uwm.edu www: www.marchaines.com/uwm __________________________________
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