[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: work product review
The following issues have been identified in the submitted work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org and a public review announced: SAML V2.0 Information Card Token Profile Version 1.0 1. Specification URIs: This Version: The path includes 'ed'; I'm guessing this is intended to point to something akin to a Working Draft. Note that the TC Process clearly identifies the stages of a document as follows: working draft (wd), committee draft (cd), public review draft (pr), committee specification (cs), and OASIS standard (os). There is no such stage as 'ed'. Previous Version: As this is the first time this document has been requested to be uploaded, it should state 'N/A'. the URIs specified in this section do not resolve (and won't, since we only upload approved documents to docs.oasis-open.org) 2. Namespaces: This section has been removed from the cover page, but the following reference is given in 2.1: Note that ns is reserved for OASIS namespaces, all of which must be identified on the cover page of a document and accompanied by a namespace document that corresponds to the template found at docs.oasis-open.org/templates 3. References: WSTrust14 reference does not meet the OASIS citation link requirements SAML1.1IMI reference does not conform to the OASIS citation format/link requirements. ------ SAML V1.1 Information Card Token Profile Version 1.0 1. Specification URIs: This Version: The path includes 'ed'; I'm guessing this is intended to point to something akin to a Working Draft. Note that the TC Process clearly identifies the stages of a document as follows: working draft (wd), committee draft (cd), public review draft (pr), committee specification (cs), and OASIS standard (os). There is no such stage as 'ed'. Previous Version: As this is the first time this document has been requested to be uploaded, it should state 'N/A'. the URIs specified in this section do not resolve (and won't, since we only upload approved documents to docs.oasis-open.org) 2. Namespaces: This section has been removed from the cover page, but the following reference is given in 2.1: Note that ns is reserved for OASIS namespaces, all of which must be identified on the cover page of a document and accompanied by a namespace document that corresponds to the template found at docs.oasis-open.org/templates 3. References The references to OASIS TC documents do not conform to the OASIS citation format/link requirements. 4. Invalid URI: In section 2.4.1 the following URI is given: That is an invalid reference. Please make the necessary corrections, re-approve the documents, and re-submit for public review. Regards, Mary Mary P McRae Director, Standards Development Technical Committee Administrator OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society email: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org web: www.oasis-open.org twitter: @fiberartisan #oasisopen phone: 1.603.232.9090 Standards are like parachutes: they work best when they're open. |
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]