Re: [legalxml-econtracts] Last Call: OASIS LegalXML eContracts XMLMarkup Requirements (Working Draft 02 - 2003-12-17)

[Jason Harrop <jharrop@speedlegal.com>]

Hi Rolly

Here's your document marked up with my comments (please turn change tracking - 
view changes on).  There are a few new ones which i've added since friday 
triggered by a review of some historical materials.

thanks,

Jason


Rolly Chambers wrote:
> Thanks. Also, a belated thanks to Zoran for his comments and suggestions.
> 
> Rolly Chambers
> 
> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "Jason Harrop" <jharrop@speedlegal.com>
> To: "Legalxml-Econtracts" <legalxml-econtracts@lists.oasis-open.org>
> Sent: Friday, April 09, 2004 11:16 AM
> Subject: Re: [legalxml-econtracts] Last Call: OASIS LegalXML eContracts XML
> Markup Requirements (Working Draft 02 - 2003-12-17)
> 
> 
> 
>>Hi Rolly
>>
>>I'm emailing you directly a marked up document containing my comments.
>>
>>In case its helpful to anybody else who is still planning to comment, i'll
> 
> post
> 
>>them to the list as well tomorrow.
>>
>>thanks,
>>
>>Jason
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>Rolly Chambers wrote:
>>
>>>To follow up our teleconference last week, this is a last call for
> 
> comments
> 
>>>on the OASIS LegalXML eContracts XML Markup Requirements (Working Draft
> 
> 02 -
> 
>>>2003-12-17). The Working Draft is available at
>>>
> 
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/legalxml-econtracts/download.php/4598/oasis-eContracts-requirements%20%2820031217%29.html.
> 
>>>Please post comments to the OASIS Legal XML eContracts list or email
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> them to
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>>>me no later than 2004-04-09.
>>>
>>>As also discussed during our meeting, I will be preparing an appendix
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> that
> 
>>>includes the scenarios referenced in the Working Draft.
>>>
>>>Thanks.
>>>
>>>Rolly Chambers
>>>rlchambers@smithcurrie.com
>>>
>>>
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