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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-85) Various editorial issues
Various editorial issues ------------------------ Key: OBIX-85 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-85 Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC Issue Type: Bug Components: WebSockets Affects Versions: WS WD09 Reporter: Chris Bogen Priority: Minor There are various grammatical and stylistic issues that should be addressed before public review. Line 137: "together the" needs a comma or a "then" Line 139: a comma is needed after "context" Line 158: "MUST not be empty" is redundant if you are saying that it must contain other objects Line 167: Gramatically incorrect - "exchange pattern the REST-style" Line 168: Missing comma after "For that" Line 169: Missing comma after "After a successful connection to the OBIX server" Line 170: "make operation"...make is a proper term and should be distinguished as such with bold or italicized font Line 171: "behaves the same than"...the "than" is inappropriate Line 201: The term "contract" should be capitalized Line 230: missing a comma after "is open" Line 231: " a property of the watched objects is changed"...should be ...that is changed Line 271: "must" should be in all caps -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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