Fw: [jodf 216] Error report from Enomoto-san

["MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given)" <eb2m-mrt@asahi-net.or.jp>]

Forwarded by "MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given)" <eb2m-mrt@asahi-net.or.jp>
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 From:    Yoshihiko Enomoto <YENOMOTO@jp.ibm.com>
 To:      jodf@itscj.ipsj.or.jp (jodf ML)
 Date:    Mon, 28 May 2007 13:41:24 +0900
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1) Section 8.11.7
Current description: 
The <table:change-deletion> element specified the id of a previously 
tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.
Proposal:
"specified" should read "specifies" as follows:
The <table:change-deletion> element specifies the id of a previously
　tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.

2) Section 8.11.8, 2nd line on page 259
Current description:
Depending on the deletion type, It is either the number of a row, a column 
or a table.
Proposal: "It" should be "it" as follows: 
Depending on the deletion type, it is either the number of a row, a column 
or a table.

3) Section 8.11.14, 8th line on page 264
Current description:
The change track table cells additionally supports the attributes 
table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned, 
table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value, 
office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described 
in section 8.1.3.
Proposal:
"cells" should be the singular form "cell" as follows:
The change track table cell additionally supports the attributes 
table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned, 
table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value, 
office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described 
in section 8.1.3.

4) Section 9.1.4, 12th line on page 271
Current description:
The word "borders" is a keyword in the following sentence: 
Defines properties such as the size and borders of the drawing page
Proposal:
The word "borders" shouldn't be akey word.

5) Section 9.1.5, Example: Drawing page on 273
Current descripton:
<draw:rect .../>
presentation:notes>
        <draw:text ...>this is a note</draw:text>
</presentation:notes>
Proposal:
presentaion:notes should be delineated by angle brackets as follows:
<draw:rect .../>
<presentation:notes>
        <draw:text ...>this is a note</draw:text>
</presentation:notes>

6) Section 9.2.5, 5th line on page 278
Current description:
In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the 
inner corners a located on a ellipse that's radius is r(100-s)/100.
Proposal: Please check if the following is the intended description: 
In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the 
inner corners are located on an ellipse whose radius is r(100-s)/100.


YENOMOTO@jp.ibm.com

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Makoto <EB2M-MRT@asahi-net.or.jp>