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Subject: Re: [office] 4.1 Question of style?
Hi Patrick, Patrick Durusau wrote: > Greetings, > > The second paragraph of 4.1 reads: > >> The XML elements that represent both headings and paragraphs are >> called paragraph elements. All text content in an Open Office XML file >> must be contained in either of these elements. > > > I understand what is meant but the reference in the second sentence to > "either of these elements" seems to be confusing. At this point, it has > not be said what those elements are. > > While not suggesting the following is the best option, something along > the lines of: > > "The elements <text-h> and <text-p> represent headings and paragraphs, > respectively, and are collectively referred to as paragraph elements. > All text content in an Open Office XML file must be contained in either > of these two elements." Your suggestions sounds much better and less confusing than the sentence we had in the spec. I've changed it. > > Hope everyone is having a great day! > > Patrick > Thanks Michael -- Michael Brauer Phone: +49 40 23646 500 Technical Architect Software Engineering Fax: +49 40 23646 550 StarOffice Applications Star Office Software Entwicklungs GmbH Sachsenfeld 4 D-20097 Hamburg, Germany e-mail: michael.brauer@sun.com
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