Re: [office] 10.1 Introduction to Chart Documents

[Michael Brauer <michael.brauer@sun.com>]

Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings!
> 
> Style comment on list in this section.
> 
>> Documents that do not provide data for the chart The chart data is 
>> contained in a <table:table> element inside the <chart:chart> element.
> 
> 
> May just be personal preference but shouldn't the second line follow a 
> colon at the end of the first one? (same comment for next item in the list)

I agree.
> 
> Thus:
> 
> Documents that do not provide data for the chart: The chart data is 
> contained in a <table:table> element inside the <chart:chart> element.

I've added a colon and removed the line break.

> 
> Or, perhaps with a colon and line space?
> 
> Documents that do not provide data for the chart:
> 
> The chart data is contained in a <table:table> element inside the 
> <chart:chart> element.
> 
> A minor point but I thought it might make it more readable.
> 
> Hope everyone is having a great day!
> 
> Patrick
> 
> 

Michael