Re: [office] 3rd para Introduction

[Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>]

Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> forth paragraph reads:
> 
> Chapter 8 describes the table content of an Open Office document,
> chapter 9 its graphical content, chapter 10 its chart content, and
> chapter 11 its form content. *Content that is common to all *kind* of
> documents is described in chapter 12.* The integration of SMIL
> animation markup into Open Office documents is described in chapter
> 13. Chapter 14 explains the style information content of Open Office
> documents, chapter 15 specifies formatting properties that are can be
> used within styles. The data types used by Open Office schema are
> described in chapter 16.
> 
> Comment: Grammatically correct but seems awkward.
> 
> Suggest: Content that is common to all documents is described in chapter 
> 12.

I've changed that.

Thanks

Michael