Re: [office] 2.3 Body Element and Document Types

[Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg <michael.brauer@sun.com>]

Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> Last paragraph before 2.3.1, last sentence reads:
> 
> The document content is typically framed by a prelude and epilogue, 
> which contains the elements which may only occur once inside a document 
> of the specific type.
> 
> Comment: I am not sure of the intent of this statement. While true that 
> prelude and epilogue (and their immediate children) occur only once 
> within a given type of document, the children of text-decl, for example, 
> may occur multiple times. (See 4.7 Text Declarations)
> 
> Suggest:
> 
> The document content is typically framed by a prelude and epilogue, 
> which contain additional information for a specific type of document.

I totally agree that "elements which may only occur once inside a
document" is a little bit confusing. I've changed the sentence as
suggested by you, but added a sub sentence conatins examples. The
sentence reads now:

The document content is typically framed by a prelude and epilogue,
which contain additional information for a specific type of document,
like form data or variable declarations.

Michael