Re: [office] 2.3.1 Text Document Content Model

[Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg <michael.brauer@sun.com>]

Patrick,


I've changed both (some elements -> elements and also for -> for)

Michael

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> The second sentence of the first paragraph reads:
> 
> To allow office applications to implement functionality that usually is 
> available in spreadsheets also for text documents, it may also contain 
> some elements that implement enhanced table features.
> 
> Comment: True but why say 'some elements'? Simpler to simply say 'it may 
> also contain elements that...'
> 
> This is common to a number of places so I won't be repeating this 
> suggestion everytime I encounter the issue. (search for 'may contain 
> some elements')
> 
> Comment: Suggest losing the 'also' in 'also for' as well. This occurs 
> elsewhere so this is a general comment.
> 
> Suggest:
> 
> To allow office applications to implement functionality that usually is 
> available in spreadsheets for text documents, it may also contain 
> elements that implement enhanced table features.
> 
> Hope everyone is having a great day!
> 
> Patrick
> 


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