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Subject: 4.4 Sections


Greetings,

The sixth paragraph of this section (and first sentence of paragraph 
seven) read:

Sections support two ways of linking to external content. The linking 
information is contained in the section element's first child contains 
in formation about the source of this element. Additionally, the section 
contains the full representation of the data source, so that processors 
need to understand the section source element only if they wish to 
update the contents.

If a section is linked to another document, the link can be through one 
of the following:

Comment: Note in formation -> information

Also note that while the paragraph starts talking about two ways to link 
to external content, it drops that to talk about where the linking 
information is held and then continues with a description of the result 
of linking.

Suggest:

Sections support two ways of linking to external content. If a section 
is linked to another document, the link can be through one of the following:

(insert the list here, then follow with a new paragraph)

Linking information for external content is contained in the section 
element's first child. A section that links to external content contains 
the full representation of the data source, so that processors need to 
understand the linking information only if they wish to update the 
contents of the section.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature
Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org
Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!




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