UK Comment 3

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Greetings!

I have incorporated Martin Bryan's comments on the public comment list 
and added some items that I uncovered this morning to the response to UK 
Comment 3.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

28, Tickmarks -> Tick Marks
31, an introduction -> the introduction
31, an document -> a document
32, Table 2lists -> Table 2 lists
39, it's -> it is
52, an document -> a document
86, non-layouting -> non-layout oriented processors should
86, Layouters -> Lay out oriented processors should ....
94, an character - a character
113, prepended -> prefixed
126, See section 6.7.8 for more information on how to use this
attribute -> these attributes
146, Two occurrences of text:id that have not been set using the fixed
width font
164, Subentries -> Sub entries
165, subentries -> sub entries
180, an default - a default
181, The sentence "To be able to specify cells for such positions as
well, the <table:covered-table-cell> element exists." might be better
expressed as "The <table:covered-table-cell> element exists to be able
to specify cells for such positions."
182, Change "cane" to "can"
186, it's -> its
201, Change "the 2nd operation" to "the second operation" to match
"the first operation"
202 of an detective operations -> of detective operations
208 an Boolean expression -> a Boolean expression
221, it's -> its
228, Change "sub conditions" to "sub-conditions" or "subconditions"
235, and 236: Change "username" to "user name" or "user-name" (which
is the form used in the attribute!)
238, "an data layout field" -> "a data layout field"
244, an member's data - a member's data
239, Change "sub group" to "sub-group" or "subgroup"
246, row-percentage needs formatting correctly in column-percentage
definition
269, assignes -> assigns
275, Bezier -> Bézier
282, renders (revisit)
295, an relative value -> a relative value
314, Change "casted" to "cast"
328, poin -> point
330, eofill -> ???
330, sub-pathes -> subpaths
332, Change "sub element" to ...
339, draw:handle-radius-range-minumum ->
draw:handle-radius-range-minimum
340, Change "are existing:" to "exist"
341, an handout page -> a handout page
351, roation -> rotation
351, Change "y animates" to y: animates"
352, Change "whole :animates" to "whole: animages",
"background,:animates" to background: animates" and "Text: animates"
to "text: animates"
352, e,: -> e:
356 url -> URL (?) (twice)
359, an header field -> a header field
367, and an by -> and by
378, tickmarks -> tick marks (three)
378, gridlines -> grid lines
391, an command -> a command
392, an command -> a command
395, it's -> it is
402, Dropdown not error, attribute name dropdown
403, combobox not error, element name combobox
404, nodeset -> node-set (as per Michael McKay)
406, like an usual push button. -> like a push button.
406, submit for an image button. (Q: Shouldn't 'submit' in in a
different case?)
412, Minumum -> Minimum
417, it's -> its
417, an default -> a default
429, focussed -> focused (twice)
429, on-performaction should read “on performaction” (form attribute)
430, on-rowchange should read “on rowchange” (form attribute)
438, an macro -> a macro
454, Syncronization -> synchronization
451, Bezier -> Bézier
518, an list item -> a list item
523, an heading of -> a heading of
556, an higher priority -> a higher priority
557, an common style -> a common style (twice)
578, have an higher -> have a higher
578, an common style -> a common style (twice)
592, it's -> its
593, styes -> styles
594, styes -> styles
623, setps - steps
636, or an percentage. -> or a percentage.
638, it's -> it is
657, it's -> its
658, it's a pre-defined symbol type, and image, or whether -> it is a
pre-defined symbol type, an image, or whether
664, tickmarks -> tick marks

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Patrick@Durusau.net
Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model
Member, Text Encoding Initiative Board of Directors, 2003-2005

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