Re: [office] UK Comment 4 (was UK comment 3)

[Michael Brauer <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>]

Patrick, all,

please not that the title of the mail I'm replying to her was wrong. The 
mail content does not refer to UK comment 3, but to UK comment 4.

I have integrated the suggested changes into the new working draft. If 
not otherwise stated, I integrated exactly as suggested. Where I did not 
do so, where no suggestion was provided, or where I could choose one of 
several option, I have marked the change with an (!) right behind the 
page number. I also found a couple of addition spelling errors. I have 
marked them with an "(M)" in the list

There are two suggestion where it is not clear to me what the proposed 
change is. These are:

402, Dropdown not error, attribute name dropdown
403, combobox not error, element name combobox

The following changes have been made:


28, Tickmarks -> Tick Marks
31, an introduction -> the introduction
31, an document -> a document
32, Table 2lists -> Table 2 lists
39, it's -> it is
52, an document -> a document
86, non-layouting -> non-layout oriented processors should
86(!), Layouters -> Layout oriented processors should ....
94, an character - a character
113, prepended -> prefixed
126, See section 6.7.8 for more information on how to use this
attribute -> these attributes
146, Two occurrences of text:id that have not been set using the fixed
width font
164, Subentries -> Sub entries
165, subentries -> sub entries
179(M) table:print-range -> table:print-ranges
180, an default - a default
181, The sentence "To be able to specify cells for such positions as
well, the <table:covered-table-cell> element exists." might be better
expressed as "The <table:covered-table-cell> element exists to be able
to specify cells for such positions."
182, Change "cane" to "can"
186, it's -> its
201, Change "the 2nd operation" to "the second operation" to match
"the first operation"
202 of an detective operations -> of detective operations
208 an Boolean expression -> a Boolean expression
221, it's -> its
228(!), Change "sub conditions" to "sub-conditions"
234(M), an member -> a member
235(!), and 236: Change "username" to "user name"
238, "an data layout field" -> "a data layout field"
244, an member's data - a member's data
239, Change "sub group" to "sub-group"
246, row-percentage needs formatting correctly in column-percentage
definition
269, assignes -> assigns
275, Bezier -> Bézier
282(!), renders -> displays
295, an relative value -> a relative value
314, Change "casted" to "cast"
328, poin -> point
330(!), The sub-paths will be filled by using eofill -> The sub-paths 
will be filled by using the “even-odd” filling rule
330, sub-pathes -> subpaths
332(!), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"
339, draw:handle-radius-range-minumum ->
draw:handle-radius-range-minimum
340, Change "are existing:" to "exist"
341, an handout page -> a handout page
351, roation -> rotation
351, Change "y animates" to y: animates"
352, Change "whole :animates" to "whole: animages",
"background,:animates" to background: animates" and "Text: animates"
to "text: animates"
352, e,: -> e:
356(!) url -> URL
356(M) a url -> an URL
359, an header field -> a header field
367, and an by -> and by
374(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"
378, tickmarks -> tick marks (three)
378, gridlines -> grid lines
391, an command -> a command
392, an command -> a command
395, it's -> it is
404, nodeset -> node-set (as per Michael McKay)
406, like an usual push button. -> like a push button.
406(!), submit for an image button -> "submit" for an image button
412, Minumum -> Minimum
417, it's -> its
417, an default -> a default
429, focussed -> focused (twice)
429, on-performaction should read “on performaction” (form attribute)
429(M), "  " (duplicate blank character in row "performaction") -> " "
430, on-rowchange should read “on rowchange” (form attribute)
429(M), "  " (duplicate blank character in row supplyparameter) -> " "
438, an macro -> a macro
454, Syncronization -> synchronization
451, Bezier -> Bézier
518, an list item -> a list item
523, an heading of -> a heading of
556, an higher priority -> a higher priority
557, an common style -> a common style (twice)
578, have an higher -> have a higher
578, an common style -> a common style (twice)
584(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"592, it's -> its
593, styes -> styles
594, styes -> styles
623, setps - steps
636, or an percentage. -> or a percentage.
638, it's -> it is
657, it's -> its
658, it's a pre-defined symbol type, and image, or whether -> it is a
pre-defined symbol type, an image, or whether
664, tickmarks -> tick marks

Michael