Review of ODF 1.2 specification draft 1.2 - chapters 6 and 7

[Oliver-Rainer Wittmann - Software Engineer - Sun Microsystems<Oliver-Rainer.Wittmann@Sun.COM>]

Dear TC members,

another Sun OpenOffice.org colleague, namely Oliver Specht 
(oliver.specht@sun.com or os@openoffice.org), has reviewed chapters 6 
and 7 and the attributes of chapter 18, which are referenced in these 
chapters.
His review results are:

- remove "." behind numbering for headings on outline level 2. In 
OpenOffice.org this can be done by using the Dialog opened via Menu 
Tools - Outline Numbering.

- sub chapter "6.3.6.1 General", 2nd sentence:
It does not make senses that the information about the sender is taken 
from the OpenDocument user information *dialog*. Corresponding reference 
to the appropriate ODF element/attribute is needed here. [was already 
the wrong in ODF 1.0 and 1.1.]

- comment to future note in sub chapter "6.3.7.1 <text:author-name>":
text:author-name is not a duplicate of dc:creator. text:author-name is 
the author of the document, while dc:creator is the creator of this ODF 
stream. E.g. Oliver create a new text document in ODF and stores it - 
text:author-name="Oliver" and dc:creator="Oliver". Oliver sends the 
document to Michael for review. Michael opens the document, makes his 
corrections and stores the document - text:author-name="Oliver" and 
dc:creator="Michael".

- comment to future note in sub chapter "6.3.7.2 <text:author-initials>":
similar to the comment about future note in previous sub chapter.

- sub chapter "6.3.9 <text:file-name>":
remove "of" between "displays" and "the name".

- comment to future note in sub-chapter "6.7.2 <text:place-holder>":
<text:placeholder> will not have any input, it will be replaced by the 
input.

- comment to Ed. note in sub-chapter "6.7.10 <text:execute-marco>":
The content of the element is used as its description. In my opinion 
this should be changed.

- "18.1147 text:display":
-- bullet item "<text:chapter>, <text:index-entry-chapter>":
remove one "specifies"
-- bullet items "<text:file-name>" and "<text:templace-name>":
include the attribute values at each display option

- "18.1221 text:table-type"
include attribute values corresponding to "SQL table", "OpenDocument 
query" and "SQL command".


Regards, Oliver.

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