Comment on draft errata

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Greetings!

I was puzzled at first by the headers:

Section   Section Refinement

Until I realized that the first column was the section number and the 
second column was a sub-heading appearing in that section.

Perhaps:

Section Number and Sub Heading

would be clearer?

Or simply

Section and Sub Heading

It being the phrase "Section Refinement" that seems to throw me off.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

PS: I am about to review it in detail but it looks very clean and tight. 
Good job Svante!

-- 
Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)