RE: Editorial suggestions from John on the report

[Hanssens Bart <Bart.Hanssens@fedict.be>]

Thanks Chris, I'll create a new working draft

Best regards

Bart
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From: oic@lists.oasis-open.org [oic@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Chris Rae [Chris.Rae@microsoft.com]
Sent: Thursday, April 04, 2013 7:42 PM
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Subject: [oic] Editorial suggestions from John on the report

Hi all - as promised, here are some editorial suggestions from my colleague John on the current report:

2.1 - second para, last sentence - font of "end"
2.1 list #1 - capitalize "the"
2.1 list #1 - add space to "ODFToolkit"
2.1 list #2 - Office-o-tron, not "Office-a-tron"
2.1 list #3 - extra space in "test  the conformance"
2.1 last para - add space to "XMLvalidation"
2.2 - empty section
2.3 third para - "convertors" should be converters
2.3 third para - "hings" should be things
2.3 list #3 - extra space in "of  internal"
2.4 - empty section
2.5 first para, last sentence - extra space in "such as  greater code"
3.2 second para, second sentence - "a iteration" should be an iteration
3.2 second para - extra space in "e.g.,  A"
4.1 second list #1 - extra space in "Errata  to"
4.1.1 - empty section
4.2 list #1 - extra space in "simple  XML"
4.2 list #5 - missing period or other punctuation in "and virtual This"
4.2 - unnecessary page break after first list?
5 - is it appropriate to speculate on future versions of ODF?  Or are these really (a history and) recommendations for the ODF TC?
6.3 first sentence - duplicate in "to to parse"
6.3 second para - extra space in "is  thus"
7.4 - extra space in "1.2  specification"
7.5 - "Xforms" should be "XForms"
7.5 - missing words in "not supporting XForms may, or remove"
7.8 - empty section

Chris

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