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Subject: Re: [EXT] [openc2] RE: EXT :[openc2] Groups - OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Draft 01 uploaded
Jason,
Thank you for your comments and feedback.
Bret From: openc2@lists.oasis-open.org <openc2@lists.oasis-open.org> on behalf of Liu, Jason J [US] (MS) <jason.liu@ngc.com>
Sent: Tuesday, November 7, 2017 10:42:11 AM To: openc2@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [EXT] [openc2] RE: EXT :[openc2] Groups - OpenC2 Language Specification v1.0 Working Draft 01 uploaded TC members,
I was blocked from voting the document release. I thought I was a voting member, but may have been stripped off the right for some reasons…
Anyway, I’d like to provide my comments below through this informal channel:
- There are too many TBSLs. A first draft should at least provide readers a pretty good understanding of the subject area(s) involved or related - A few good examples will help readers understand its application for solving real world problems - Other issues, see attachment for detail
I’d suggest take it back, revise, and send for another TC review before going public.
Thanks, Jason Liu, CISSP/CISA/CISM, Technical Fellow Northrop Grumman Information System
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