comments on Chapters 4-7

["Tsutomu Kamimura" <EBB0CMB@jp.ibm.com>]

Here are comments on Chapters 4-7.



Remaining items are on improving explanation
in Chapter 6 on Class, Subclass and extended properties, and Chapter 8.
On Chapter 6, I and Wakao-san intereacted with Matsumoto-san, There seems
some challenge here since much of descriptions is generated by a tool from
ttl and resource Shape.

On Chapter 8, I will read it next week
and will give feedback to Wakao-san.


Tsutomu Kamimura

Consultant, IBM Tokyo Lab Strategy

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