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Subject: comments on CS02
PROMCODE TC, I did one more review of CS02 and found the following problems that need fix. All of them are minor and of editorial nature. T. Kamimura ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Section 1. Introduction change rdf:Propertyãto <code>rdf:Property</code> 3.1.6 ManageItem -> ManagedItem 3.1.11 Project Change the last sentence A Project resource also specifies the metric and the unit type of size of ScopeItem resources because they should be unique in a project. To A Project resource also specifies the metric and the unit of size of ScopeItem resources, each of which is unique in a project. 3.1.16 WorkItem Change the last sentence It adds details to the description of the work that is described by a ScopeItem resource. To: It defines the work to be performed to create a (part of) content described by a ScopeItem. 3.1.18 ScopItem -> ScopeItem 3.1.32 ScopItem -> ScopeItem 3.1.38 Change by producing in the sentence A WorkItem resource, such as reviewing the design, is required by producing an Artifact resource ... To: for producing 3.1.42 Artificat -> Artifact Section 4. Conformance The two sentences are for constraints, not for vocabulary. They should be changed to: PROMCODE servers MUST use the vocabulary terms defined here where required, and with the meanings defined here. PROMCODE servers MAY augment this vocabulary with additional classes, properties, and individuals. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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