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Subject: Fwd: review comments of CS02
To PROMCODE TC,I did one more review of CS02 and found the following problems that need fix. All of them are minor and of editorial nature.
Hiroyuki Yoshida (Individual Member) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Document reviewed:OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 1: Specification https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-spec.html
1. Introduction 1.2 Goal and Solution ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] 3. Terminology Project ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] Project Management ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] 4. PROMCODE Domain Model Specification 4.1 Domain Model 4.1.1 ScopeItemÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained ScopeItem entities -> finer-grained ScopeItem entities ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a coarse grained ScopeItemãentity -> a coarse-grained ScopeItem entity ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a set of finer grained ScopeItem entities -> a set of finer-grained ScopeItem entities
4.1.2 WorkItem ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a finer grained activity -> a finer-grained activityÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A coarse grained WorkItem entity -> A coarse-grained WorkItem entity ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained WorkItem entities -> finer-grained WorkItem entities ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a set of fine grained WorkItem entities -> a set of fine-grained WorkItem entities
4.1.3 ArtifactÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A coarse grained Artifact entity -> A coarse-grained Artifact entity ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities
4.1.6 ManagedItem AttributesÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String)
4.1.8 Report Links correspondsTo: Plan [0 .. 1]ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ the Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity -> a Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity
4.1.11 ManagedItemCollection AttributesÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String)
4.1.14 Project AttributesÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String)
LinksÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit[0 .. 1] -> unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit [0 .. 1]ÂÂ (put a blank character after Unit)
4.2.2 Applying Quality Management Table 2 Example of Quality Management Table ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ Line of Code -> Lines of Code ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ Artifact, and Measure -> Artifact, Measure, and Measurement Appendix C. References C.2 Informative references ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ <a href="http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=" https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/"> ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A Guide to Project Management Body of Knowledge, 5th ed. -> A Guide to the Project Management Body of Knowledge ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ <a href="http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=" https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/"> ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ http://www.pmi.org/Â; -> https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/
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