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Subject: Re: [pbd-se] Groups - pbd-se-v1 0-wd04.docx uploaded
Dawn, I've reviewed the Rev 4 document, and the work is really impressive. Attached is a copy with my comments and suggested edits in tracking mode. One additional comment: I would recommend that we consider including a "How to Use this Document" section or something similar (to complement Section 1.4, "Outline of the Specification) because of the complexity of the material and at times overlapping and cross-referenced material across sections.
John Sabo |
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On Jun 2, 2014, at 2:19 PM, Dawn Jutla wrote: Submitter's message |
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